when we allmost went whit water rafting

on camp i went  water wafting but first we needed to be safe and armoured up  when they gave me the helmet i was so  scared I thought i would scream.When i was on the raft I saw how  armoured up   the  raft was so then I didn't fell as scared as what i first felt like but just then i saw the big dark rock got way  more scared because i thought the raft would pop on the sharp rack but then something change  but I will not tell you until the next pitcher

when we went whit bored wafting by louis

   This was when we where going whit water rafting and this was when my dad took a picture of the people who came came with me and my dad and  that was when we had lunch .There will be anther pitcher soon by. 

my gools

I am learning to use expression when I read.I am learning to write the end of term 1 I will be  a bell write to a narrative. disclabe words  I am learning to do the pencil and paper method in maths. 326 + 137=453
326-137=211.

Maui and the Taney fa by Louis

The Taney fa

One day maui sent people out on the bots to get fish.And crabs but when it turned nit time they nether came

bake maui  felt that same thing did not feel right the next morning he took same strong men with hem and he also took

the thing that mauie always had it was strong enuf to bring a

whale or evin a island up it was maui's fishing hoke his grand. Ma

gav it to him and he went on a boat with the men and he went

aowt and he frow his fishing hook in the ocean and he waited and watid then he saw a big shadow in the water maui told the men.

To hold the rope  it took hold of the fish hook and the men help’d

maui pole the fish up but when they started to pull it up it was not a fish at all it was same kind of monster and then it dumped the bot and

then maui’s hook was in the sea lost for ever and. When maue woke

up his men were made of stone and he was on the best but it was

dead and maui fort for a name for thes best and he made his daichin. The name of the best was taney fa.  

                                     

Writing : Narrative Legends.

Writing  Narrative Legends	I need help to write  a narrative legend.	I can write a narrative legend if I am guided.	I can use some structures of a narrative (beginning, middle, end, setting, characters, plot) I can use some descriptive words to describe characters, setting and events.	I can use the structures of a narrative (beginning, middle, end, setting, characters, plot) I use a range of descriptive words to describe characters, settings and events. I use a range of simple, compound and complex sentences.   I can organise my ideas into paragraphs. I can check that each sentence is complete and makes sense.	I can use the structures of a narrative (beginning, middle, end, setting, characters, plot) I use a range of descriptive words and details to describe characters, settings and events.  Using figurative language to help develop connection with the audience. I deliberately use a range of simple, compound and complex sentences to set the mood of my writing.   I can organise my ideas into paragraphs. I can check that each sentence is complete and makes sense. I seek feedback on how to improve my writing.